do you like these lyrics that I just wrote?

I don't know what I should do about them, if I should keep going with
it or if I should stop writting this song because I got uninspired for
a while, and I forgot about them until now. And I'm only 18 so please
don't be to harsh on me :) But I'm a girl who loves to sing and write
music :) And I just started writting a little while ago so um yeah...
do you like them ?? And I was thinking of maybe calling it "This Time"
But It don't know what to call it yet.. so do you have any ideas?? I
was also thinking of maybe "On the Road" but that's a movie, so I
don't know if I'm allowed to use the same name as the film. But
anyways here's the lyrics :) Hope you like it :)

You made me take the chance
To fall back in your place
To follow where you go
To always take your pain

You made your mind up once before
But you never took the place
You were always in a race of chase
To take that time in space

You never said I'm finished with you
You never told me we're done
You always said you won
But how?!

You made me change the road so many times
before now
To go back in time so slow now
I wanted to change sides
But you were always on my mind
But you were always on my mind

On the road with you felt like we were one
But in my mind I wanted to change directions
To take a separate road,
On the road with you,
I wanted to change roads
But you would never let me go, so

So this time before now,
Has changed my mind again how?
The time has come for me to go on
For now (ooh)

That's the end of the song for now ;) Hope you like it :) And I get
really really inspired by Taylor Swift :) And this song is supposed to
be kind of pop country I guess like Taylor Swift's Better than Revenge
:) But yeah please tell me what you think ! :)